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Verse 1:
Way back when she met him
it's like she wasn't there
he never paid attention
he never showed her care
then life moved on, they parted ways
she told herself, "There's better days."
The start of her crushed heart

Chorus:
It's alright, she'd always say
love will come to me someday
there's always something new to learn
it's just not my turn.
I know my time will come.

Verse 2:
Then grown up, much older
she thought she found the one
all her friends they told her
"girl, your heart is won!"
they made some plans, holding hands
but before too long, he'd be gone
apart is her crushed heart.

Chorus

Bridge:
she didn't see it quite like this
no she would have never guessed
so deep from her past
could it finally last?
(He came back around)I got rid
(and she's now found.) of these two lines.

Chorus modified:
'cause it's alright, she'll still say
love has come to me and hey
there's still something new to learn
even though, it's my turn.

Yeah, it's alright, she'll still say
love has come to me and hey,
there's still something new to learn
even though it's my turn.
I know my time has come

I know my time has come,
Yeah, I know my time has come.

New Song

So, here are the cheesy lyrics to my new song...I wrote it all tonight. It took about 2 1/2 hours.

It has no title yet and I'm kinda chicken to put it up here, and I don't know how I feel about it quite yet, so just enjoy it and don't think I'm too much of a nerd!

title of the song goes *here* when and if it ever develops!

Verse 1:
Way back when she met him
it's like she wasn't there
he never paid attention
he never showed her care
then life moved on, they parted ways
she told herself, "There's better days."
The start of her crushed heart

Chorus:
It's alright, she'd always say
love will come to me someday
there's always something new to learn
this time, it's just not my turn.
I know my prince will come.

Verse 2:
Then grown up, much older
she thought she found the one
all her friends had told her
"girl, your heart is won!"
they made some plans, holding hands
but before too long, he'd be gone
apart is her crushed heart.

Chorus

Bridge:
she didn't see it quite like this
no she would have never guessed
so deep from her past
could it finally last?
He came back around
and she's now found.

Chorus modified:
'cause it's alright, she'll still say
love has come to me and hey
there's still something new to learn
even though, it's (could be) my turn.

Yeah, it's alright, she'll still say
love has come to me and hey,
there's still something new to learn
even though it's my turn.
I know my price has come!

So, this song basically is about my love life. However, if I tried writing one song for all the heartbreaks I've had, I think I could out-write most artists! Now, I haven't REALLY found love...it's too soon to tell, but this song was party inspired by a handsome man I've recently developed some feelings for....and I'm done writing before I spill my guts out! There's just something about a blog that makes you want to say so much! Good night blogging world!

Constructive criticism is always welcome, so please comment!